I had no idea what it was about but the lines of the poem told me all i needed to know.
I love how you made the words speed up as you wrote, or that may have been the way i was reading it, lol
But well done!
5/5
*gem*

I loved the ending! People don't tend to end a poem like that, but you did, and I liked it! I like your choice of words too, and the topic is unique. Keep it up!

Hatori