5/5 always
Kate

Loved it. I try to live those same rules. 5/5
-Black night-

I cannot sit and watch people suffer and die
or to build my relationships on one big lie this is the strongest part to me atleast great job! check out my newest one called morphine drip plesereat poem keep it up i love you style and your a great guy as it seems

This poem is very good and has a great message. The rhyming was also good, I think sometimes it can either make or brake a poem, and here it made it.5/5

lots of love
-Becky