Very nice. This is a really sweet poem, and I can relate. :) *5/5

Ooh. This poem was so sweet. I don't know what to say. The structure was good...loved the rhyming. Loved the whole thing!! An amazing write! Keep writing! And thanks A LOT for your comments! 5/5!

-` Liz

I like this one cos the flow is very tidy and it allows the rhythm to come to life
Well done
5/5
*Gem*