Really well worded, great job

Wow. Incredible. Such little a poem means so very much. Very good job at attracting my attention, and awesome job at leaving me hanging wanting more... with such little before.

Inspiring, and i love your style and form.
5/5
~yellowfeverlime

I love the style of your writting. I love small poems with tons of meaning. I think it's a harder task then going on forever, with useless repetition. And more than anything, I enjoy your use of vocab. amazing...
5/5

marcella

Damn this poems sends a shock through you so well you just cant but read it twice

Hmm, you always create great images, but it is hard to understand the point of the poem. Perhaps show how this is a portrayal of boredom at school? At least that is my interpretation.