Im pretty sure i know who you wrote this for=] you are such a good writer! yes i am jeaous very jealous! lol.

So sweet and delicate. rich with youth and young love. very nice. this might be my favorite of yours. 5 for you! -beav

Your Love......
Loss for words but they're in my heart
Only wishing we never part
awwwwwwwww i wihs you all drems cometrue thispoem relates to me.. may you live long. i loved your poem take care

Beautiful x

Good poem, not bad at all.
The Angel of Secrets

Wow, m'dear. You are an incredible writer! I don't know how I missed your poetry.

I love how this is an acrostic. You wrote it well with such a restriction (did you think nobody'd notice?)

5/5
~Stephen White

Very nice vocab
I know and understand the words and you didn't get to carried away
wonderful job
I really liked the sweetness of this poem
it wasnt complicated or hard
it was just beautiful and there
wonderful job
5/5
love from
kaila

Such an excellent poem, the vocab and the flow were great as well as the imagery. Sometimes just hearing the voice of the person we love is enough to make it by, even if only for a few hours. Excellent write 5/5 GG23

Its very clear that your a such a talented writer and i love this one it was just so awesome! i loved it 5/5
-Michelle

Fabulous poem!

i absolutely love it.
the rhyming is really good.
it definitely captured my attention.
i love the emotions you put into it
as well. =]. thanks for commenting mine!

Wow I loved this. Your words and emotions were so beautiful and I couldnt help but smile while reading this because it reminded me of my love. The last stanza was the perfect way to end your poem. Well done *5/5*

"When you speak I become undone."
hmmm. amazing writing. (: it captured how you really feel about the one you love. beautifully written!!!