Wow, such imagery...I can feel as though I am witnessing this argument. The structure begins to taper a bit half way through, but its still very good.

* 5/5*

[PygmyPuff]

It is not who's fault that remains the committed question but who dares take the chance.

Don't let her go if you believe all this pain to be worth it

Friendship is a good thing. Don't rush it.

Good poem i had a fight with someone before and i never really wanted to give in to it. eventually i learned to let it go and leave the past behind.

see if that helps.
~5/5~
Sam Mayo