Wow that is the total truth actually. trust is something that you think you have from all of your friends but if you think about it something is going to get out from most of those people. it is hard to find and everyones lucky when they found it in someone. good work
xx.chelsea.xx

Exquisite! Great use of vocabulary & nice rhyme'in. Keep it up. 5/5

*spelled with such ease, *

should be
*that is spelled with...*

*venerable, *

should be

*vulnerable, * ?

*but is complex to find, *
should be
*but it is complex to find, *

Great poem, and once again i can greatly relate. Trust is something that i have not met that much.
5/5
~Stephen White

Ooh. i liked this one! betrayal is really shown thru your words. good work babe

much love and many kisses,
bex

Nice job good wording! I liked the emotion it flowed nicely too I loved this one nice job