Wow i love the flow to this poem, it makes it really easy to read. well done x x take kare x x

This poem was a good read, I picked up on what you were putting out there as soon as i read the first few lines, i think its a very good skill to pull the reader in and them knowing the feel of the poem straight away and you pulled it off nicely... Good work =)

This is unbeileveable.. no Im being so serius right now. You should submit this to a contest. I'd definately give you first If I were the judge. One of the best poems on this site <3

This is such a great poem. I really love it.
I know how it is to try and be the girl in the poem, so it's also really nice to hear negative things about being like that, as most poems to do with it are about like how it feels to be like that and that kind of urges you on, if you know what I mean...
What makes it such a good poem compared to others is you have such a strong point in the poem it doesn't just ramble on, every words seems worth being there.

Thankyou so so much for the comment on my poem, all the things you said were so helpful, and they were all things I knew needed work on but I just couldn't think of the right word... so I'm really thankful you helped me out :-)
keep writing you are amazing!

- Polly

Hmmm... well i have to say i can relate to this girl. The title drew me in, becuase i guess you could say i have a mask myself.

"Try be perfect be who you're not,
And drain your body of all its got,
To be that skinny pretty girl,
Over the sink you vomit and hurl,"

^ i really liked that bit of the poem. Probably because i can relate to it, but it was just really great. The poem was really great becuase none of the rhyming seemed forced at any point, and it worked really well with the poem. I like the aliteration, "Pray perfection"- it was great. The conclusion was really strong. You bringe back the thought of a mask... and like i said i can relate to it. Very enjoyable yet... quite i dont know, maybe its becuase i can realte to it so well i felt as though i was reading about me. Keep writing...

OKAY! Share your talent, dang! Lmao.
I'm just kidding. I really loved this, perfection seems to be the world's latest trend...
Well, anyway, you wrote this poem beautifully. The emotion is powerful and overwhelming.
5/5
ily
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