Wow I could find myself in this one... It was writen very well, the rhyming was good as well. The only thing i saw unfit were the 2 first lines...

Never the less this poem was truly excelent so there is no doubt about the rating in my mind =).

Take care ..

Well worded. to the point. simple. excellent. 5/5 liked it. i know what thats like.. im out of it now and i dont care =]

take care you
-linds[x]

Most people feel like this at some point, i know i do! That was a really sad poem though, well done xxxx 5/5

This is very good... one thing though. I know it sucks to be someone you arent...but at least on this site you CAN explain how you feel you know? Im here if you need anything!