For a short poem, it was fairly good so i gave it a 4. i think it should be a couple lines longer for the reader to get a little more from it. but thats just my preferance. =] good jobb.

p.s could you also read one of mine? =p

--linds[[x]]

You should add a little more, it has a good idea and it's going in the right line, i know you could do better.