Aww this is a very good poem about losing someone. this is about a friend right? if so i think you should put in the 'broken friendship' cat.
but the poem was really good and i liked it a lot and i know how that feels. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Flows well. strate to the mane point. good job:)

I really liked this poem I too have lost a best friend and it's not hard at all hang in there you know there are people here who care for you

Well written I luv it so

Your soo good that.. keep it up.. lol.. i know how you feel..

Nice poem, it had a good flow and was nicely written, I couldnt see any changes needed so good job. Thanks for commnting on my poem. The more you do the more I'll return the favour.

Best Wishes
Wallace

5/5

Aww this is sad....i give you props for another great poem!!!

Very good poem, very strong emotions, the style was nice,i thought the ending could be alil bit better but it was great. Great job, and thanks for commenting on my poems.

Well shut my mouth