Comments : Paradise Seed

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. It flowed really nicely together. && was wonderfuly worded. You did such a great job on it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Great job again and again heartfelt it flows well words fit wonderfully keep up your great great great work
    ness

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aw hun. that really came from the hear didnt it? it was gorgeous. well done

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 16 years ago

    by rene

    Wonderful, beautiful...you write alot of love poems i see, i write alot of dark ones, were two side of a split heart arent we?
    great poem, ill be reading more.