Aww this is such a sad poem, but I can tell it came from your heart. I defiantly know how this feels! You are such a talented writer! 5/5

~Kristina

Awh. Such a sad, sad love story! But it was really good. It flowed pretty well. & Nothing seemed forced. I can deffinitley tell it was from the heart. It had a lot of emotion in it, as well.

But why do anybody needs to change?

^ I think that should be rephrased to 'But why does anybody need to change?'

And there are a few grammatically incorrect sentences.

But I still thought it was really good.

Beautifully penned. Keep it up.

Bri.x

Such a sad, sad love story, wonderful read and there are a few errors as menchened above, great at showing emotion and it truly is from your heart.

This poem didnt grasp me like others do. i found it a little hard to get into

much love and many kisses,
bex