I am enchanted.

I was extremely captivated by the smooth flow, rhythm and rhymes that I read this line, "Your eyes sparkling fill me with belief," as, "Your eyes sparkling fill me with DISbelief." Haha, how silly of me!

"Your gentle lips[;] the cure to my horrid day,
Your strong arms[;] my cage to the outside" land," -- It's just a suggestion; no need to incorporate it with your piece. =]

On the whole, this is an amazing piece about disproving the ridiculous "theory" that Love doesn't exist. Without a doubt, this was written lavishly well. I'm in awe whilst rereading it over and over again. Kudos'
Keep on writing what you feel and like.
all the best and take care.
Debbie

Hmm I think I liked this overall. It was sweet and simple. Of course it's an overused subject, but actually you wrote this quite well.
I have some suggestions...
I think after "lips" on the second line and "arms" on the third line you should add punctuation, maybe a semi-colon?
Furthermore, I know you're really good at rhyme so I expect a bit more from you than rhyming "above" with "love" it's too average for your work lol.
Thanks for sharing.

The word choice again was amazing the flow was flawless, the emtion was deep strong and clear, again you have outdone yourself, take a bow, for you are the star that just stole the show, great job 5/5