That was a great poem. I loved the rhythm and flow. The emotion put behind the words allowed for the reader to really enjoy the writing.

Thought I would check in with the whats up and was not disappointed! love how you are not cliche! love your vocabulary, not your everyday fawning love poem, truly enjoyable, and worth reading again and again.

The poem is perfect but I need some help from you on how have you chosen song of songs as the heading. I love the wordings in this piece. wow 5/5 please smile 4 me by readin my 'fart is an art'

With love
Fsams