It was such a pleasure too write this with you Dost...You made it fun...I hope we can do this again in the future. You matched everything I wanted to hear...Excellent job....I was extremly lucky to have had the chance to work with such a talented writer as yourself.
Your heartbeats are breaths i take
Your tears just pass my lips by
Touch your heart to feel my love
Flow with destiny, never ask why?
I loved the way you ended this. Thank you for this gift.
Love your Dost Cindy
Cindy and End of Eternity - wow - that poem was so beautiful that I sat at my work desk with tears in my eyes. I guess maybe its because the biggest fear I face in my life is loosing my husband at some stage in our lives and me wishing to be with him. It was so beautifully written that, although I still have fear, I hope that when death does separate us temporarily we can still talk like this to each other and know the other one is there for us still. Many thanks for the read. Moira (I've added you both to my favourites as I truly enjoyed this read).
Oh my God. that was soo good. this is one of the best poems ive read this morning. such meaning behind it. a very touching write. u no how to capture a readers heart. very sad write also. good job to the both of u! xx