Wow this is really good! i defiantly enjoyed reading this poem! it was brilliant! it flowed really nicely! 5/5

~Kristina

This is beautiful. This is exactly how I feel with my boyfriend!!!

5/5

Great job. Always a wonderful place to be safe in the arms of the one we love.

Lying in your arms
Feeling safe and secure
Don't want you to let me go
For our love is so pure.

Take care Cindy

5/5 .. it..is.. so.. cute. i really likes this stanza..

Doesn't matter if things
Are getting hard at home
because I know I'll always
Have someone to call my own.

and the two last lines.. its cute. nice flow and rhyme to it. simply beautiful.

This is seriously the CUTEST poem ever. i loved the way it rhymed, and you could just feel love flowing from the words. Awesome job, 5/5.
<3

Lying in your arms
Feeling safe and secure
Don't want you to let me go
For our love is so pure.

Beautiful words.

*sigh* What a beautiful poem! i loved it! sooo cute! 5/5

~Ciao

Lovely poem...it was very enjoyable and very well written..keep up the great work