This was beautifully written.
So sad, yet such a wonderful read.
The flow was good, and you held my attention throughout the poem.
Great work!

What is the poem about?

The flow in this poem was great!!! i loved this poem

So five years pass,
And she still doesnt know.
I just wanted her,
To help me grow.

Now shes dead,
He took her away.
Ill see her forever,
In heaven one day.

^those were my 2 favorite stanzas... great job, and 5/5 from me.... thanks for the comments too :]

Loved it, it was really emotive and touching, the rhyme and flow were perfect and it was altogether a great poem =]

Hey this is a good one... i love it keep up the good work

Wow your poem is flawless. I loved the way you rhymed it. I felt that the words really came from your heart and not just made up as you went along. That was full of emotion and I loved the ending. 5/5

Awww. this was really sweey. And sad, but really just wow excellent. good work 5/5