It was pretty good. But let me give you a little advice: When you read the poems that u write yourself, you understand them (because ur the one who wrote them) But sometimes when other people read poems, they get a little confused on "why?" as in "what caused the poem to be written". I'm just saying that poems are a whole lot better when you make it clear to people. Your poem was really good. I just know that you can be even better. :)

Thanks, i dont write poems lol i just had a bad time and this helped. but i like writing so i'll make sure i make it clear next time!