Wonderful job on this piece. Loved the word choices. Excellent.

Standing on the edge of death
She inhales once, her dying breath
Upon the moon, she hears the call
And in the the pitch of darkness falls.

Really liked this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

A splash of blood to tend her needs
She rips the heart and sees it bleed
Into her mouth the potion pours
And once again, her body soars.
^^^
I love this stanza Auntie ....it gave me goosebumps galore.
I am completely convinced that there is indeed no topic beneath the sun, that you can not write about.
It is so great to have such a wonderfully talented Auntie ... lol

Wonderfully written....don't know that I can pick a favorite part....it is all outstanding. Great imagery, flow and rhyme scheme. 5/5 All the best, Debbie