Comments : Satan's Deal

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! The imagination in your dark poems is excellent. I think you should still consider writing a book :)

    knew they'd finally catch me, my sins have come to call.
    In Satan's lair I now reside, my time has come to fall.

    This stanza will really make people think.
    Great Job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Awesome dark poem.... you are the best at this style!

    I try to push out thoughts of choices I have made.
    Now I know a deals a deal every bill must be paid.

    Love the ending! 5/5 Debbie