If this poem is written on a past or current experience I am truly sorry and offer my condolences. I loved the poem. I too, know how the relationships can feel so painful when one person loses the will to fight for it. Keep it strong mate.

This is a common aspect of looking at situations like this, yet you twisted it somehow and made it really cool. I love this poem.
Oh by the way "Everday" should be Everyday, at least I think so anyway.