Are you sure your 14, this is a wonderful piece, love the flow and choice in wording, i give it a 5/5!!!

This is a great poem wonderfully done i like the darkness of it:) good job

keenan

This was actually very dark, the more you read it.
you can get so many interpretations out of this, which is amazing.
being able to visualize more than one thing with a poem is hard to do.
5/5