Pushed to the limits of intensity
Locked away from sanity
Forced into the world of insanity

^^^
I really like these 3 lines Bonnie.
This poem really challenged my mind.

Trapped In The Depths Of My Mind
^^
A perfectly chosen title!
Great to see you back writing Bonnie.

Bonnie
Very deep thoughts in this write. I'm glad I read your work.

I fear to close my eyes at night
For I dread returning to the depths of my mind
What would be thought of as unimaginable
Turned to a cold reality..

These thoughts are hard to live with. Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Great write :)

thanks for reading my song lol it has a rough draft of what the chorus it, I normally dont post things like that but I didnt want to out it on my myspace so i threw it on here lol
take care <3

Wow.. very very intense
The questions this poem raises could cause a whole debate, lol
Some excellent use of vocab and imagery
Well done, excellent poem!
5/5
*Gem*

Giorgi porgi LOL
Wondeful poem as alwayz u write from da heart & speak da truth
ur poems r alwayz real deep
many ppl go through da same thins but r just afraid 2 admit wat dey feel
it's da sense of alwayz bein afraid
no1 wants 2 b vunerable
every1 alwayz pretends 2 b strong

luv ya

p.s thanxs 4 da comments LOL Would u lyk 2 b mi partnr? sose was da best

Ending is so sad, true and effective. I like topics of your poems, and wording is great. Once again excellent poem, it is very emotional and you wrote it superbly. rhythm of this piece is incredible. Well done!!! It really deserves 5/5

Being trapped in your own mind is what other people call crazy .. i don't think it is though i think it's true brilliance to be captivated within your own mind
excelent poem once again! :)