Comments : A Pirate

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Civilization ends at the waters edge
    ^^^
    I love this first line Bill.
    Wow such creative writes you are coming out with lately, my friend.
    My head is just so blank lately. At least I have R.T.V.W's wonderful poetry to read.

    Amazing read Bill, as always, my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    This is really great....lots of meanings in this write.

    All in a days work...a pirate's life for me
    Take all you can, give nothing back
    See my ship on the horizon...it is time to flee
    I live by the jolly roger...Jack!

    This stanza really stood out to me.
    Take Care Your Friend Cindy