Comments : Stay beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    And what a beautiful poem :] It flowed really well, even though there was no rhyme structure.. it was still very amazing! It didn't take away from the poem at all, maybe even made it better. It had so much emotion & love in it :]

    I really loved it. Amazing job. Keep it up.

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow....this was purely beautiful. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by ChaoticallyMe

    Nice and direct with the message...which works at times. The main point of my message usually gets lost with having too many ideas. Way to keep it clear :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice job I could tell there was a little bit of near rhyme or from my point there was nice job!