I like this really well written the flow is perfect and the word choice good, except i wouldn't use shortcuts like the word coz because it can wreck the flow, just a suggestion. anyways great job 5/5

100% descriptive and i liked it coz it had a unique style.

Very metaphorical and creative. 5/5 worth piece

It was very creative. your mind with writing is just beautiful. the way you express the idea is undeniably amazing. 5/5

Very original piece. It isn't classic love poem, which is great. You created unique atmosphere. Flow is excellent and this piece is written greatly.

Superb description n the imagery is vivid. lovely piece.