Comments : I need you to reach a conclusion

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    That was amazing! I loved it.

    "In our love there'll be no contradiction
    I dream about you in deep contemplation
    Your visage is always in my imagination
    And no one can lead us to separation"

    that was beautiful!

    5/5!

    ~*Alex*~

    P.S Your poems are so great, I'm going to feel stupid for you to read mine haha.

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Amazing this is just flawless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was an ok poem for me. I don't know there was just to much "ing". Other than that it was ok. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    WOoooo this is fantastic. 100% strong vocab used and great rhymes. Loved the lines :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    A very special poem to me. Loved the rhymes. Its just superb