"I'll stay this way for long
With you I would not go wrong
With you i would feel so strong
I sing this song ding ding dong"

^ Love the ending... Very creative & I've never seen anything quite like it... The emotions were strong & the flow was flawless. Wonderful job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Simple and sweet dear so sweet. Just like twinkle twinkle. 5.5

Wow this is a great poem and the nice rhythm really caught my attention. Lovely love poem :)

I have added you into my favorite. hope that is ok, but your poems are just amazing. i love the concept of this one. it was lovely to read and it was so sweet 5/5

Wow simple n sweet.
I enjoyed this love twinkle twinkle.
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