I really like this one.
It has a really sad concept but it has meaning to it at the same time.

nice work
5/5
-Em

Im gonna enter your poem in the weekly P&Q contest.
hope you win

Oh wow, Dan. That... is by far ur bets poem ever. Very very good conceptual strength and meaning ; D Really Amazing. think you outdid urself. this was a brilliant read. i'm so proud of u....

XXXXX Yours for eternity
suzie

I thought the concept was awesome but it dulled out halfway and lost a little of the emotion.
Great tho.

GA