A great poem, i have no other words for it =) 5/5

Simply, wonderful. great job

--**Skye~

This is a very good poem and rhymed really well. We know how it feels to live in such misery. I think everything rhymed very well except for the following:

Fourth Stanza

-I think this stanza just needs a little working. It's really beautiful, I'm not trying to be harsh but it has to work a little bit to rhyme a little better.

you meet new people,
you make new friends.
you make new enemies,
you'll fight till the end.

Fifth Stanza

whose the playa,
it's hard to tell,
they trick and use you,
(and watched you when you fell.)

-Could be a little better. I know you could do it.

Other then that, Everything was perfectly well written. Great JoB!

5.5 You deserved it!