Comments : How Do You...

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Yet another great poem of yours and i love this part so much
    "You've filled my soul piece by piece
    And saying I love you is such a release
    It rekindles my soul the more I say it
    Don't ever change my darling
    For when you do
    The world will be very blue "

    great poem keep it up, you have what it takes to make a great poet, the raw emotion and the life behind it, keep it uup!!!!!!!!!!