I like this poem alot, great job

The flow was awesome. wat else can i say. this poem rocked. it had a special meaning. i loved it!

keep writing. 5/5 David

This poem has a definite rhythm to it.

Definitely tells a story and keeps the readers' interest.

A great read!

5/5

Excellent poem. very short, but well worded. =] i liked these two lines "for every burn
is a flower within"

Wow great imagery and discription so far this is my favorite nice job!

Wow. I really liked the flow to this. And the 'story' was really nicee to read as well.

[so that i can feel]
^^ Suggestion [So I can feel]
It helps the flow out a bit more. Because I found in some places, some lines were too long for the shorter ones you started off with. Other than the flow in some parts, I thought it was very well done. I liked the theme of it too. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Interesting poem, it is strange but very unique and filed with emotions. Imagery s fantastic and I like your word choice. I really love it, it is so powerful and deep.
Well done!