Its always hard to pull thru after things fall apart, its a nice poem one that i could relate to :( 5/5

COMMENT # 5

oh my gosh.. definitly my favorite poem ... other than your poem living in reverse.. which i LOVE btw.. lol .. okay anyways... back to this poem.. the flow is fantastic as welll as the word choice... and altough the idea is a little cliche.. the poem turned out beautifully... the last line was incredible... great job.. REALLY great job :D