Wow, such a powerful poem/song. The meaning that lies within is so deep and greatly portrayed. This was oustandingly written, I give props to for writting such a meaningful poem with such emotions that linger within.
I really, really liked this. I think it is more befitting as a poem rather than a song. This was a very emotional piece, and I love who you pieced it together and the words you used to do this. I love the ending...it's bittersweet, and I think it fits perfectly. Great job :] 5/5. I'll read more when I get the chance! Thank you so much for your comments, they are very much appreciated!!