The first lines of your poems always throw me off guard. From the title, they're never what I expect.. and I love that!

In this poem, the first stanza is definitely my favorite. The other stanzas are just as good, but the first has an especially unique point of view.

Great job! 5/5

I loved his poem so much! It was a pleasure to read, thank you. It reminds me of myself... 6/5 :D