This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

Hey... beautiful thought... such a lovely and sweet poem... it really brought a smile on my face... ya sometimes I feel the same... but then I hide everything under a smile...

such motivationg poem...

'Even on the toughest days
keep your chin held high.
Someone always cares
and it's okay to cry.'

^^ this is brilliant... my favourite stanza... very meaningful... ya its ok to cry once a while... it makes you feel a lot better...

one suggestion- try experimenting with new words... that would improve your word choice...

otherwise a very thought provoking poem..
loved it..