Very nice imagery in this piece! Good job!

Nice poem...really does paint the picture of a storm. It had beautiful imagery and I nearly felt as if I were standing in the rain. It was really a great piece, and I'm glad to see ya posting again! Thanks for ur comment!
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Gem
What a nice description of a storm. Great job.

It shows no sign of stopping
As it rages through the night
Pitch black with rumbling noise
Lit up with sparks of light

I can see the storm
Take care Your friend Cindy

The sheet of rain speeds up
As the thunder grumbles through
A fork of blue light flashes
And splits the sky in two
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Gem I absolutely love this stanza!

You create such amazing visuals with this piece. Unbelievable how I could see and even hear the storm through your words.
Wonderfully penned deary!
I'm going back for a second read .... wonderful read.

Awe gem anoher great poem, the storm has a special meaning for me, also it helps to hide the tears and always promises sunshine and calm after it passes, thanks for reminding me that even the worst of the worst passes :) 5/5 and yeah its YOU who doesent respond to emails lol :P

This is a brilliant poem!!!!!
Amazing i could see it all in my head!
I love storms (well as long as i am cosy in the house) Excelelnt 5/5

Kelly
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