I really like how the poem's rhythm draws you further into the content. You can almost feel as if your there with the person as they slash their wrists. I feel guilty for something I didn't even do.

That is a fantastic and unique peice of work, keep up the great work

Hey, this SO amazing ... i havent read many poems latly but this is truelly perfect it flows so well and you can feel the emotion of the main chrachter. You read one of my poems about a simmillar subject i feel so privillaged that you liked it. Keep It up !!!

Very sad write, but Beautifully done. The Emotions are utmost splendidly expressed, you did a fanastic job. Keep it up. :). Thank you for the comment as well.

Very Good. 5/5. Read some of my poems if u want too..i need some comments cuz i havent gotten any yet and i would appreciate some. Great work

Terribly sad.
The emotion was pouring through and this poem hit me hard. The word "freak" in my mind seems so evil....probably because I hear it often. Anyway, wonderful poem. 5/5 Keep writing.

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Ths is awesm. u jst mde it 2 my faves gal! ur wrds r so powerful nd deep. u rly no how 2 tuch people!

Great...no EXCELLENT poem. Like everyone said it really draws you in and makes you feel as if you were right there when it happened. Very well written with a great flow. Keep writing!!! 5/5

Beautiful
absolutly beautiful
and i can 100% relate

i love it!!!

xxx

That has an awsome flow and really spoke to me. i used to be bullied really badly and can relate. hope that this isnt true for you. to anyone who bullies people, plz read this annd if u av a heart u will stop and listen. your words are only words to you, but they are destroying someone else.