Awe...wonderful poem.

Quite easily the vocabulary usage was teh best thing about the poem. It had really great imagery. It had a good flow and good rhythem. Again the repition bought alot of effect. I liek the "Leave me" then it goes on to "dont leave me", this again is really effective. One thing through all your poems that i disliked was your lack of punctuation. I odnt knowi maybe thats just me, an excellent read, keep up the great work! xx

This poem seems slightly ironic to me, although I'm not positive why. It's filled with equal parts of love and hate and, therefore, is easy to relate to for all readers. Word choice could use a bit of improvement and more consistency, but other than that this poem was great! 5/5