Hmm.. This is an interesting poem. I like the sarcasm in it, it is definately a unique way of writing what you were feeling here, and I can definately feel your pain. The only thing that puts me off is that the rhyming scheme changes in each stanza and the lines are very differing in lengths at some points. But the main thing for me is the rhyming, I just personally think that if someone should bother to rhyme, it should rhyme, and have the same rhyming scheme the whole way through. Just my opinion, but I like what you were trying to say and how you put it across.

Tammie xo

It has a very odd flow ...
but i like it .

its definitely unique from all the other poems I've read .

i can feel your pain bursting out of this poem . the sarcasm was a nice effect .

great job . and keep up the great work .

xoxo ;; LAURiEE`