Comments : Hold Onto My Life

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    So 4 or 5? or didd u make that part up? Greatly written babe and idk how i can help...but please just let me talk to you without neone else and knowing it can stay between us
    luv ya
    ~Peanutt

  • 17 years ago

    by lil miss music

    I feel your pain

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful poem. really sad but i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxoRoseyxoxo

    WOW YOUR WORD ASSENSUATES MY FEELINGS TO SMILE NICE JOB PLEASE CONTINUE 2 WRITE MORE