I know I already read 2 but, i feel like reading more lol. Now this poem is my favortie out of the three. Great imagery all througout. It's sad yet, you wrote it well. 5/5

marcella

This is great i could really realate.

Slowly,
But surely,
The blade strikes
Harder
^^^my fav. part
Keep up the good work!

This is really good - very sad - i like the way you ended it.. it kinda makes me think of the way some of my poems end - not sure why but anyway yeah great poem thanks xx

I loved this poem! I loved the ending it was really good! I loved the third bit it was wonderful!