HI! I LUVED CUZ OF TWO REASONS!
1.)THAT HOW I FEEEL TOWARDS MY BIRTH FATHER.
2.)IT WAS WONDERFUL!I LUVED IT!GREAT JOB!

This is so sweet..
u rock !!
that is really exelent!!
good work =)
Fillie

This one's a nice poem. Hope I'll be able to do a lot of rhymes on my works just like yours. Keep it up.

Particularly like the last two lines, which indicate that you accept the hurt and the need to move forwards, yet still requiring your tormentors to release you to go and find happiness. Brilliant - lets hope they do!
Neil.

I really like this one

Wow this poem is great i love it your a great poet

Love the poem, love the rhyming, love the emotion, love it all!

I like this poem, but i really dont think it is THAT good

This is so sweet and sad i love it

This is so sweet and sad i love it

Loved the way you -almost- repeated each time twice the begining of a sentence.
n_n has a very nice flow
5/5

I likee Thiis Onee Alott...
xx..

Great...I love it...
5/5

Nice job...

This is one of my favorite poems i have ever read... you write very well i really loved this poem!!!5/5

Wow..again a very good poem! Im adding you to my faves, I like your writting style =) keep it up.
Arielle
~Heart Beat Thunder~