Comments : One Small Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    THATS AMAZING. great work:O. has a lot of meaning comment one of my poems if you get the chance.
    5/5

    xx.chelsea.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by xInvisiblex

    That was well written.
    I liked how it said "one small girl" at the beginning of each verse.

    "One small girl
    Who's grip is always tight
    Never letting go
    She doesn't give up this fight"

    I liked that verse the best. =]
    Keep writing.

    =xx=DeAndra=xx=