Comments : My first love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    ZOMG!!!.. (hehe) Yeah!! this is precisely what I am currently going through!! Talk about hitting the nail on the head. This is a awesome poem, well done.

    O.. p.s Thank you for the reply and the comment :). Very much appreciated

  • 17 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    I really enjoyed this piece. It was short and concise to the point. mild ryhme scheme. I was able to relate to it in a unusual way. I give you a 4/5 Good job on this piece.