It really got my attention,that's the thing called love,you have a expression way it's not hard to read or understand what it's about
Keep it up
See ya
Your friend Laura

This was probably the best acrostic I`ve read,something about the way you ended one stanza and started the new one seemed just right, wonderful,you inspire me to try another one.

I love acrostics and this was so well written. Great job.

Good poem. nice flow.
I loved it.
5/5

~Chelsea