This is real good, kinda depressing though. but still, i give it a 5.

Good job i loved it keep up the good work.

Nice work. i liked this poem, i can relate 2 it in a way, the cutting part not the pills. anyway ur poem made me remember about how i alwayz tried commiting suicide but god gave u ur life, he'll take it when he wants 2. dont force it.
but overall i liked the way u wrote the poem. keep up the good work.5/5 =)