Wow good job exellent flow came out really good and has alot of meaning to it...this is very true for anyone everyone has there rough times and people need to just get threw them like this alot 5/5

This was good, and inspiring. Keep up the good work dood ^^

Forever,
-mello193...

Really great poem i hope you read some of mine, 5/5 great job, really nice screen name i luv the picture you chose

I love it. :]

I loved it I just wish everyone would think this way then this world would be different.

Nice... l like the medaphores

I thought this was absolutly amazing!!! I loved how well it rhymed.Well done

Beautiful . Having suffered depression , this is something that really touched deep down . You're very talented , and very persuasive . 5/5