Comments : You are

  • Awe its sweet. well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Just a thought...The 'you' at the beginning of the second stanza needs an 'are' after it. Other than that, awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was really very cute!....that was awesome!...5/5 from me...comment back?

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Awesome:)